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crowfootWed Feb-20-08 11:49 PM
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"Daughter of Falcons 4 (by Morpheous)"


  

          

It's been a while, so refresh your memory by reading parts one through three here.


Then read . . .


Daughter of Falcons (Part 4)
by Morpheous


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ERRATIC_CHEESEThu Feb-21-08 01:49 PM
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#1. "RE: Daughter of Falcons 4 (by Morpheous)"
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Thu Feb-21-08 01:52 PM by ERRATIC_CHEESE

  

          

Acrobat Reader says it is unable to decrypt the file. Just me?

I'll try updating Acrobat, I think I'm on version 6.

  

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ERRATIC_CHEESEThu Feb-21-08 03:37 PM
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#2. "RE: Daughter of Falcons 4 (by Morpheous)"
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Okay I read it. It's only 4 pages. You can not update the FAN FIC once every twelve years with only a 4 page story. This is insane and wrong.

  

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MorpheousThu Feb-21-08 05:54 PM
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#3. "RE: Daughter of Falcons 4 (by Morpheous)"
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Apologies Erratic Cheese, I had written that not long after the 3rd chapter and that was a few years ago. A life changing event took me away from all this and then I stumbled onto that piece of story again a couple of weeks ago while going through my computer. I would like to at least finish that storyline even though I lost touch with Mechwarrior stuff but all depends on time and whether anyone is interested or not.

  

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ERRATIC_CHEESEFri Feb-22-08 12:10 AM
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No need to appologise, I understand completely. I was just angry because I spend an hour trying to upgrade adobe and then all I got to read was 4 pages.

The story is great BTW.

  

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crowfootFri Feb-22-08 12:15 AM
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I'll try updating Acrobat, I think I'm on version 6.


Yea, sorry. I started setting minimium specs to Acrobat 7, since the program is free and people can easily download an update.

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ERRATIC_CHEESEFri Feb-22-08 12:23 AM
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If anyone finds themselves needing to upgrade ADOBE READER I recommend NOT using ADOBE DOWNLOAD MANAGER. Simply find a torrent of the file. ADOBE DOWNLOAD MANAGER installs all sorts of stealth junk onto your PC.


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crowfootFri Feb-22-08 12:29 AM
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Oh yea . . . I did like the story, a nice primer (hopefully) for further story development.

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MorpheousFri Feb-22-08 02:06 AM
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Yeah the acrobat thing stinks. I've tried twice now to upgrade to the latest version and failed miserably. I've noticed that stealth crap before as well and it makes me cranky.

  

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JagerTue Feb-26-08 08:14 AM
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Good work, Morpheous. Please continue.

Jager

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Ogrewolf_01Fri Mar-21-08 02:54 PM
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Life sucks, than you die,
Deal with it and carry on!

I been waiting a long time until you got the story going again, and it's to bad that it's only 4 pages, but a great start for a new perspective, the "town" side of the story!!

exelent idea!!!

Just PLEASE!!! update it!!

Greetz Ogrewolf_01

  

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Jawbreaker6Sun Mar-23-08 08:48 PM
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More please...


On a side note: you gave us environmentals in the opening--the heat and its affect on things. I would like to have had that kind of thing continue into the tent. Couple the heat with smells of dirty, nervous people etc...it will make for a more visceral experience.

Regardless--keep it coming.

  

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